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Done with Bickazer's! Going on to Rascalover's soon.

Hello, as you requested, here is my review:) : He has told me is a “human” and that his people live on the other side of the stars... He told ...

The first link is the first part and etc... :D Thank you in advance.

Okay, after a long hiatus from YWS, I'm back and ready to review more! :P Some new facts about my service: -as mentioned by some members above, my reviews are ...

Both of them aren't necessarily posted by chapters, but oh well... :P Thanks in advance.

My suggestion is that the author should not merely focus on the plot and the characters. Give a breadth of life and some nuances to the settings and characters by ...

I haven't posted on YWS for a while, but nevertheless, I had been working consistently on this project for the past while. So yeah, most of you reading this will ...

I kind of did CastlesInTheSky's but probably not the chapter she wanted me to critique. I might probably continue looking out for that. D: Meanwhile... next?

Sorry to be late with this review, but here it goes: She stood on cold stone. Her gaze sought something in the distance. Her gaunt, honey-coloured fingers clasped the leash. ...

A headless ghost. D:

Since you have gotten quite a few grammatical reviews already, I guess I'll be brief and talk about the story itself: I feel that the first section needs to be ...

Done with scasha's and Eimear's! I will get to SunshineOrange's shortly. D: I usually review quickly, but because I was away for some reasons, I couldn't. So sorry about the ...

Nitpicks: The sun had already deserted the day and retreated amongst the clouds, leaving a few rays of pinkish light to stream through the gaps in the leafy ceiling, long ...

Alright! Sorry about the delay of the review but here it goes: The room was dark, a dim gray light shining down from the upper corner of the room. I ...

It was short! Way too short! But anyways: It was a word that was slowly beginning to feel like a straightforward definition of his life; as if it was consuming ...